GIẢI ĐỀ IELTS WRITING TASK 1, 2: THEATRE AND JOINT FAMILY

Dàn bài, bài mẫu và từ vựng IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 cho đề thi thật ngày 23/01/2021

TASK 1: The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.

BÀI THAM KHẢO

The diagram illustrates how a theater changed between 2010 and 2012.

The two primary sections—one for performances and another for customer support easily seen when viewing the map. To meet the demands of an expanding number of patrons, the theater underwent a general expansion that included additional amenities.

In 2010, a left-winged storage area, a back media room, and a front auditorium encircled the small central stage. The auditorium remained the same after two years, but the media center, which included a shower room, and the storage, were moved to the left and right sides of the stage. A hall was added at the back, enlarging the main stage.

The old admin office and ticket office were replaced with a few restaurants close to the main entrance on the left. Instead, the admin office was moved to the furthest left corner of the customer zone, and the ticket booth was put to the right of the front door.

TỪ VỰNG

Patrons: a person who gives financial or other support to a person, organization, cause, or activity-  người bảo trợ

Amenities: a desirable or useful feature or facility of a building or place - Tiện nghi

Left-winged storage area: Khu vực lưu trữ bên trái

Encircled: form a circle around; surround - Bị bao vây

Task 2: In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

BÀI THAM KHẢO

In several Asian nations, where individuals still prefer to live with their parents after finishing their education and finding employment, joint families are still prevalent. While there are many benefits of this trend, such as emotional support, help with housework, and financial security, they far exceed any drawbacks. With the use of suitable examples, the essay will go through both sides of a proposition in more detail before coming to a logical conclusion.

First off, one of the greatest advantages of a blended family is the emotional support it can provide for a child. As we all know, having a family is important when pursuing a profession since it helps to have them when facing challenges. Moreover, because household responsibilities are often shared among family members, those who live with their parents are probably not required to perform any cooking or cleaning. Additionally, even if they are adults, parents still provide financial assistance for their children, so when someone lives with their parents, their financial load is lessened most crucially since they do not have to pay their debts right away. For instance, a research on persons aged 20 to 30 found that those who live with their parents are more physically and intellectually fit than those who live alone.

However, there are some drawbacks to living with parents as well. One of the primary issues is that there isn't enough time or privacy for the young people. Someone who stays with their parents may become totally dependent on them and experience many challenges in their future. For instance, a girl who has lived with her parents for 30 years and then decides to study abroad would encounter greater challenges than a girl who has always lived apart from her parents.

In conclusion, while there are certain drawbacks to having a joint family in today's culture and this trend is not appropriate for modern society, the aforementioned trend still has significant advantages for adults and is beneficial to both sides of the family's children and parents.

TỪ VỰNG

Joint families = Blended family: an extension of the nuclear family (parents and dependent children), and it typically grows when children of one sex do not leave their parents' home at marriage but bring their spouses to live with them - Gia đình chung

Financial security: the peace of mind you feel when you aren't worried about your income being enough to cover your expenses - An ninh tài chính

Financial load: Tải trọng tài chính

Intellectually fit: involves a combination of physical and cognitive training. Your brain is trained to stay fit and healthy with the help of physical exercises which utilise your intellectual powers - trí tuệ tốt

Encounter: unexpectedly experience or be faced with (something difficult or hostile) - Bắt gặp

Live apart: To live in a separate location from someone with whom one formerly shared a house - Sống xa nhau

Aforementioned trend: the person or subject that has already been mentioned - Xu hướng nói trên

♻ 11Bilingo giảng dạy các khóa học tiếng anh bao gồm: tiếng anh online 1 kèm 1, tiếng anh giao tiếp online 1 kèm 1, tiếng anh thương mại online 1 kèm 1, tiếng anh cho trẻ em online 1 kèm 1, Luyện thi ielts online 1 kèm 1, luyện thi Starters online 1 kèm 1, luyện thi movers online 1 kèm 1, luyện thi flyers online 1 kèm 1…

Nếu bạn muốn tìm kiếm giáo viên nước ngoài đào tạo cho mình các khóa tiếng anh online 1 kèm 1.Bạn có thể liên lạc với 11bilingo qua các kênh sau nhé:

• Website: https://11bilingo.edu.vn/
• Fanpage: m.me/11bilingo.edu.vn
• Zalo:zalo.me/3576915388143482248
• Hotline: 0901189862 (phím 1 gặp bộ phận tư vấn và phím 2 gặp bộ phận quản lý lớp học)
• VPHCM: R.1508 - Vincom Center - 72 Lê Thánh Tôn. Q.1. HCM
• VPHN: Tầng 7, 174 Thái Hà, Q.Đống Đa, Hà Nội